tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post6083367022092156942..comments2023-10-07T04:17:59.737-05:00Comments on Poetically Jstar: Thoughts-Guest Poet Tanaesha LeakJStarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17099140114891597338noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-59679877900494263402010-05-04T17:43:09.596-05:002010-05-04T17:43:09.596-05:00Your girls are so big!Your girls are so big!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-28268835781845734572010-05-04T17:42:35.955-05:002010-05-04T17:42:35.955-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-67522327511906793862010-04-29T05:16:20.034-05:002010-04-29T05:16:20.034-05:00These poems are VERY GOOD.
Such wonderful words,
E...These poems are VERY GOOD.<br />Such wonderful words,<br />Emotionally Confused Syndrome? WOW..<br />Please do get yourself a new blog...<br />I would like to be your FAN.<br />Happy Thursday!<br />Mine is <a href="http://justmeshakirack.blogspot.com/2010/04/obvious-connection-haikus.html" rel="nofollow">here</a><br />hugs<br />shakiraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10264352891639027269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-40333174352600168882010-04-28T19:37:16.511-05:002010-04-28T19:37:16.511-05:00yes your daughter needs her own place - very good ...yes your daughter needs her own place - very good stuff. <br /><br />Good works those things out amazingly<br /><br />love moondustwritermoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-64204396165154366642010-04-28T19:23:12.337-05:002010-04-28T19:23:12.337-05:00Your daughter's poem sounds like how I used to...Your daughter's poem sounds like how I used to write when I was young and going through the "love changes." She writes really well. Keep encouraging her to use that as a medium. Let her know that my favorite one is 'Wait and See.' The line, "But still I can't wait to hate you." I have truly been there! ;^)Expressions27https://www.blogger.com/profile/15697081236721757910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-62559973011520201302010-04-28T18:49:49.113-05:002010-04-28T18:49:49.113-05:00OMG! She is amazing! I loved all three!! How deep...OMG! She is amazing! I loved all three!! How deep for such a young girl. She got an I'll soul Jay. Dont let her lose that. <br />"You have not totally crushed my heart<br />It still beats"<br />*claps* Simple line with heavy meaning. Kudos!!<br /><br /><br />-Cook.ThePoet.<br />Also, please check out my new blog<br />SillyCook.tumblr.com<br />Thanks! =]Cook.ThePoet.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05315185258939369950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-41289600799848344312010-04-28T17:32:59.844-05:002010-04-28T17:32:59.844-05:00yay! glad everything worked out for this week...th...yay! glad everything worked out for this week...that is awesome! your daughter has some serious talent!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-79413505089752864722010-04-28T16:47:43.353-05:002010-04-28T16:47:43.353-05:00OMG... I already told you it's time she create...OMG... I already told you it's time she created her own blog... Sorry , maybe I'll just go and read her then LOL<br /><br />I especially loved this last stanza<br />I can be<br />Without you<br />And the next will heal<br />And put back together<br />What your love has broke<br /><br />So soon the lesson is learnt!<br /><br />marvellous!<br /><br />Hugs ;)Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-18852117223821704212010-04-28T15:09:56.813-05:002010-04-28T15:09:56.813-05:00The poetry is good. Like the comedians that becom...The poetry is good. Like the comedians that become as funny as they are due to the pain they've experienced, it seems like your daughter has pain of her own. <br /><br />Even though it seems that we have so much more to say when we are hurting, I hope things get better for her because there's so much more to life than pain. <br /><br />I do love the way she expresses herself though and puts her words together...especially in "Emotionally Confused Syndrome".Beauty in Rare Formhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14969553750592306360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-80204362368548372162010-04-28T14:25:05.693-05:002010-04-28T14:25:05.693-05:00those are actually pretty good!! very mature and w...those are actually pretty good!! very mature and well written : ) she should definitely make her own blog.<br /><br />God is very very good, i'm happy for you.<br /><br />you're learning to set aside your pride, i'm learning to control my emotions.<br /><br />i tagged you btw!sssdawnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09511468349016162150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-12420772568131446112010-04-28T13:55:53.936-05:002010-04-28T13:55:53.936-05:00this is a fine poem too,
Happy Wednesday!this is a fine poem too,<br />Happy Wednesday!Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-30919469933727796832010-04-28T13:08:44.160-05:002010-04-28T13:08:44.160-05:00YES Champ!!!! I STILL need a lil more just to mak...YES Champ!!!! I STILL need a lil more just to make gas...but I WILL make it through!!! :) Yes, she is really getting better each poem...JStarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17099140114891597338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-16486346729754977592010-04-28T13:01:42.622-05:002010-04-28T13:01:42.622-05:00Glad 2 see everything wrkd out 4 you. Your daughte...Glad 2 see everything wrkd out 4 you. Your daughter has untapped talent. I see that she gets in a real rhythm with her words and thats assign of a big vocabulary. I love all 3 poems.25champhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00031759739084066386noreply@blogger.com