tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post8939035917179930748..comments2023-10-07T04:17:59.737-05:00Comments on Poetically Jstar: Souls KissedJStarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17099140114891597338noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-81197366599219892242009-11-05T05:16:45.447-06:002009-11-05T05:16:45.447-06:00Thanks Heavealie!!! And the thing is that I still...Thanks Heavealie!!! And the thing is that I still carry love for that man, but he is married and we can never be together. Our family is like an extended version of his family so I see him regularly too :( but I guess it wasn’t meant to be...<br /><br />Liam, ok I am embarrassed to say but I had to look up what a prose poem was lol. I have never taken any writing classes or anything so I really had no idea. Ok I looked up prose tho and it said no rhyme or reason basically an active story written beautifully...Ok, I can see where everything I write it what I felt at that moment so it’s active. I would like to discuss this further on email if that ok? msjstar@ymail.com I do want to grow in my writing very much and would LOVE some pointers!!JStarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17099140114891597338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-81538332342303523172009-11-04T15:21:14.714-06:002009-11-04T15:21:14.714-06:00I don't want you to take this wrong. I am just...I don't want you to take this wrong. I am just genuinely curious.<br /><br />Have you considered not writing in prose sometimes? I would love to read your take on things from that perspective.Liamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519085240108038732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1424824430706039919.post-66837863004797906422009-11-04T14:45:18.344-06:002009-11-04T14:45:18.344-06:00breaking all the barriers finally yes the two soul...breaking all the barriers finally yes the two souls have connected!!well written poem with tender emotions!!in the end love overcoming all the barriers and emerging from the depths was well portrayed here!!well written and keep writing!!heavealiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05584324709724609146noreply@blogger.com