Wednesday, December 8, 2010


Awaken Love-Charlotte Atkinson


His touch awakens, as a breath of fresh air
His kiss evokes feelings deep
Way beyond a casual affair
With my heart at ease, comes peaceful sleep
His heart soothes inner fears
His eyes confirm sincerity
Wiping away stains left from trails of tears
Walls tumbling, leaving room for prosperity
His personality completely comforts, emotions ignite
His hands guide in new undiscovered directions
Withstanding disagreements, previews a different light
Willingly demonstrates truth behind affections
His voice fills my ears, profoundly outspoken
Words don’t give justice to an unwritten lyric
With him, love prevails the unspoken
His love fully awakens my spirit



twist said...

As always your pen has the blessings of God behind it not to mention that it help apply words from a beating heart. If men only knew the power emotions can have in changing ones life.
Keep scribbin poet!


Brian Miller said...

glad you had a great birthday...awaken...awaken...lovely verse...

Anonymous said...

that's how i feel about him too. our desire for him is mutual!

P.S i'm glad you had a great birthday!

Big Mark 243 said...

I will check Twist out. I did not know it was your birthday... sounds like you had a good one! Your girls not only know you but love you very much!!

Tee aka The Diva's Thoughts said...

Aaawwww!!! I am so glad you had a wonderful birthday.

BTW - I LOVE Strawberry Shortcake too. My fav!

25champ said...

Long time no see. Happy bday I'm so late. You have an inspired pen. I love it! check out my latest post n have a blessed day!

Moanerplicity said...

Loving this way you marry your words to together & create this tranquil poetic flow w/ each subject you embrace. Nice work, JStar!

Congrats on the first poem written for & dedicated to YOU! I will check out your friend's page.

Snatch JOY!


Traci Lavette said...

Friends...REAL friends and our babies are the best gifts we could have been gifted. So happy you had a memorable birthday! I'll check out your friend's page and see what it do LOL! Enjoy the day!

Dulce said...

Lovely poem lovely image... oh You know how I love pctures with te poems... I'll go and check out that friend of yours... Hope you had a superb birthday- so as to keep on celebrating until the next Dec 7th (beautiful date BTW)

Miss.Fortune said...

I'm a day late but happy belated birthday!
kudos to your girlies!!!!
and I'm sooo glad you had a great birthday

JStar said...

Thanks everyone!

Champ, I couldnt open that link

Miss.Stefanie said...

Yay for great birthdays!

The Write Girl said...

It sounds like you had an amazing birthday! I love your poem as well. It is so inspiring. God bless and I'll check out your friend as well.

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