Thursday, December 9, 2010

Vibe

Vibe

Vibes flowing within my veins
Of thoughts remain
On the tip of my pen
Releasing over and over again
Flooding paper with unspoken words
Previously unheard
No longer locked inside
All my secrets I confide
Feeling the rhythm
Becoming the victim
Getting lost in thought
Inner battles being fought
Verses being scribed
Syncing with each syllable of this vibe

 

14 comments:

twist said...

Your mind is a endless scribe I see. Keep thanking the man ustairs for these powerful thoughts you share with us!

Brian Miller said...

keep syncing...and dont become the victim...thats the easy way out...

JStar said...

Thanks so much Twist! :)

:)@Brian...I wasnt talkin about that type of victim...Kinda referring being a victim of unspoken words releasing...Being so trapped in my thoughts that I am becoming a victim to my words...

elizabeth said...

love the photo!

25champ said...

spoken like a true writer :)

Traci Lavette said...

Girl, it was flowin'! Sound like it should have a beat in the background while you spit! Nice...short with a lot of punch to it.

JStar said...

Thanks everyone!

I am working on that now Traci...Recording a CD of me spittin my poetry with beats in the background :) yes yes now

Dulce said...

Keep on with those vibes my dear... you are wonderful!

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/12/09/birthdays-in-magpie-44-when-i-open-my-eyes/

Happy Belated Birthday to you.
keep writing,
your poetry rocks.

JamieDedes said...

Good poem. We all can become victims of our throught process, and you have written well about it.

Here for Jingle to wish you:
"Happy Birthday!"

Have a great day. Poem on ...

Miss.Stefanie said...

Love this!!

The Write Girl said...

This is a beautiful poem to describe the wonderful process of writing. I like this...luminous and insightful.

jules said...

This is beautiful!

Jingle said...

Hope you well, season's greetings!

Awards 4 U, Merry Christmas, Thanks 4 Being My Friend!

and


Awards 4 U, Stay Blessed