Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Double Crossed


Double Crossed

You were the one I thought I’d spend my life with
But our “happily ever after” was a myth

I thought I knew you, everything about you
But your lies have been seen through

It hurts because above all else you were my best friend
That one person I could always depend

Now our friendship must cease
Leaving my broken heart in one piece

But at least now I know the truth
And am sure of what’s it’s my view

Now it’s time to let go and move on
My love is now withdrawn

Because you were never worthy of me
Not worthy to be the trustee

Of my heart and all that entails
And all of that would have unveiled

I guess it’s just you’re loss
With your plans to double cross

 

8 comments:

25champ said...

I know the feeling when betrayed...Just remember that vengence is the lords and it's still good 2 pray for him, but like u said it's his loss. Hope u feel better :) huggs heres the link again http://25champ-lovestoned.blogspot.com/

twist said...

A pen is a powerful healer of all emotions! Thats my quote! We may have to pour our hearts onto paper since life forms are willing to except the love!

Great drop!

Brian Miller said...

ugh. so sorry jstar...i am glad you are able to let those feelings out in your words...

Moanerplicity said...

Betrayal sucks mad donkey dong! It kills something precious inside a corner of the spirit. Whatever he did, I hope he makes it thru this crisis, intact.

However, you, JStar, have all the tools needed to get thru this & most any soul-crushing disappointment. The cure lies in your ability to express & to narrate your interior, & in doing so, you can emerge from the other side of it. That's a powerful gift! Never treat it lightly!

Snatch JOY!

One.

Tee aka The Diva's Thoughts said...

Oh I'm so sorry about that. I know the feeling the devastation something like this cam bring. I've been there. *heavy sigh*

elizabeth said...

i can relate to this poem.

Miss.Stefanie said...

Sometimes, ya need to know when to shake hands and let them on their way and when to hold their hands. Good thing you know who he REALLY is now.

Big Mark 243 said...

So many good comments already... I hope the content is not drawn from anything currently going on in your life. I know that when I get on a ramble that I occasionally preface or qualify an entry with 'jus' sayin'', so that folks don't think I am talking about 'me'.

That said, when a talent writer puts words to the experiences and observations of their life, they have the ability to affect the readers of their work. That is what you did here, JStar.

Have a great weekend!!