Friday, November 20, 2009

Scarred

Unable to trust
Scorned
Cant move beyond lust
Unforgiving
Always skeptical
Tired of giving
Game detectable
Heart torn
Wanting love felt
My heart mourns
Playing cards that are dealt
Unable to give all of me
My love lies enclosed
Unable to set free
True feelings not disclosed
Scarred
Scorned
Unable to trust…

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10 comments:

heavealie said...

glad that you posted your earlier again.as i told you even the best of poems sometimes just go unnoticed!!this poem was deep,dark and full of flowing emotions.trust is a very big word in this game called love.very well executed idea and i could definitely see the scars of love in your life through your words.keep writing your poems are a breathe of fresh air.i like the way you showcase reality and the dark parts of life in your poems.

JStar said...

:) Thanks Heavelie, and I love your comments....Yea when I first started this blog I posted all my poetry at once before I had people follow. So, most of my old stuff never got any views...

Yea, this poem hits the nail on the head of how I am feeling. I tried a relationship but couldnt trust so it didnt work out...

Don said...

True feelings never revealed. I feel you, JStar. Trust me, I feel YOU.

JStar said...

Yea it gets that way Don, when you have enough of the BS...and scared to give your heart again, even if you know he is true...

Liam said...

Well they're all new to me and I like them. I'm glad that you mention when you wrote it. I wouldn't want to confuse the mood your in now with the one from the past.

JStar said...

Liam, yea I am not quite sure when I wrote it...A few others that I posted before were old as well I just didnt tell yall :)

E's said...

Writer's block? What's that? :) I feel the hurt in this one. Hurt ppl hurt ppl - I feel that too...

Senorita said...

We all get writer's block. Just take your time.

I hope you feel better soon.

* ! zodiac ! * said...

this poem was beautiful. i can realte because as im typing this comment i feel this way about my mom :(, she has no idea how she hurt me

JStar said...

@E- I just havent been able to write anything lately...Yea, hurt people do hurt others...I really hurt my ex...Didnt mean to...

Thanks so much Senorita :)

I am glad it touched you Zodiac, I am so sorry that she caused you so much pain.