Emotions felt deep enough to bruise
Mind erratic and confused
Knowing what I want and need
But allowing my heart to continuously bleed
Tears of blood fall from my eyes
Actions are not too far from my demise
Inside I am grieving
Suicidal thoughts conceiving
Fighting that inner struggle
Seeing reality is a constant juggle
Images flashing
Self torture rehashing
Attempting to stay above
And erase these thoughts of
Hurt and pain
Allowing inner happiness to reclaim
Finding that strength to compete
And stop focusing on deceit
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9 comments:
I love your poetry; it's raw and real! I can relate to this one ;)
Thanks :) Yea, a friend recently said that she couldnt believe I would share it all. But it helps me to write it, so I hope it helps other to read. Everyone goes through things in life...and this is my expression...
Thanks a lot, that really means a lot to me...
very sad, very powerful.
Heartfelt write JStar, I can relate...
THANKS Liam & 1manview!
That means a lot and inspires me to write more...
I'm feeling this. I love your poetry.
Aww thanks Lady Dee...All the good comments have really been encouraging me to write more and grow as a writer...So, now I am attempting to expand in areas that have been untouched for me :) This is the first that I have shared...I always wrote from the heart releasing emotions, never considered it any good. :)
This is a bitter sweet! great writing
Thanks alot Unbreakable!!
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