Monday, December 28, 2009

Let Me Love You

We’ve had our share of ups and downs
At times we thought we couldn’t get through together
Saying goodbye is all to familiar heartbreaking sounds
But your love still grazes my heart as calming as a feather
We’ve attempted to walk away time after time
But the love we share is out of our control
Any rough mountain with you I am willing to climb
You hold the only key to my inner soul
These feelings are deeper than we thought possible
Still we keep our guards up, ready and armed
Instead we need to completely give in to the impossible
Take cover within one another and completely unarm
I guarantee I would satisfy every need or desire
Want for nothing because I am all yours for the taking
I can provide you with ANYTHING you require
To fulfill your every fantasy my heart is aching
Just let go and let me completely love you
I promise you will have no regrets
Within our love we entirely subdue
Any disappointments you will soon forget
Baby, just let go and let me completely love you…

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10 comments:

Dulce said...

WOW J, the way you write is awesome, always that so very appropriate rhyme... and the content... so full of love compassion, redemption, forgiveness... yes, what we seek is what we eventually get..
Great post

Hugs my friend!

JStar said...

Thanks so much for you kind words Dulce :) *blushing*

Secretia said...

That is a beautiful poem, I hope you become reunited with your love. I'll pray for it to happen, if that's what's right.

Secretia

Gregorio Martino said...

Whew, I was getting warm just reading that. By giving all you will get all. That is what makes it so special.

JStar said...

Thanks Secretia :) I have been praying for months, so I hope that it works out for the best...

I am still waiting on my all Gregorio...I give and give, but dont receive half of what I give, maybe oneday

Don said...

I guarantee I would satisfy every need or desire
Want for nothing because I am all yours for the taking
I can provide you with ANYTHING you require
To fulfill your every fantasy my heart is aching


Nothing like a guarantee. I was taken aback by this passage, cause it rings loud and clear. It's almost as if I can visualize the passion.

Jstar, now you know that you shouldn't go around breaking young boys' heart...(the song Billie Jean. lol).

JStar said...

:)@Don...Yes, in those lines you can feel the intensity of my love for him...I just wish he knew how real and instense it really is...

I know I know Don, I couldnt help it...I was scared to love...Scared to let him in..But little did I know, my love was already there and he was already completely in my heart....

25champ said...

Most of what we accomplish in life is motivated by the fear of failure....That includes love also. Keep the faith and reward will be bliss! Great post!

Paul Wynn said...

With time things will come its the patience that will see if you will prevail.. great post

JStar said...

Thanks 25Champ...I sure hope so...Because I am still terrified lol...but I am trying my hardest to have faith!

Thanks for stoppin in Paul Wynn :) Patience is something I am attempting to learn but its so hard, esp when I am lonely :(