Wednesday, December 9, 2009

Devotion

I am not fakin this time around
My feelings for you are deep and profound

I know I hurt you not just once but more than twice
When your love will always suffice

I am ready to give you all of me
Not half or a fraction, ALL of me

You are someone I could commit the rest of my life to
For you there is nothing I wouldnt do

When I am around you my heart skips a beat
My body goes numb from my head to my feet

Nothing else matters, as if time is standing still
Wanting this feeling to last from now until

Forever and a day
Words cant possibly relay all that my heart wants to say

My actions will show my hearts true emotions
To you I pledge my undying devotion

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY STEVE (My step father)

21 comments:

Dulce said...

Wow Girl... That IS love!

JStar said...

:) Yes, yes, yes and I can no longer deny it...Now I just cant wait until he gets here...I never thought it was possible to feel this way about someone that I havent seen in months...Any other time I would have gotten bored and moved on...But its just something about him that I cant get over...No other man could ever compare :)

Dulce said...

I know so well what you feel...Good luck and enjoy him!!!

JStar said...

Thanks, I sure will do that :)

25champ said...

I hope he hears you because I'm convinced. God Bless and Good Luck!

JStar said...

Thanks soo much 25Champ! Thanks for reading, I see this is the first time I have seen ya...Will have to check ya out...I Pray he hears me loud and clear as well...But he knows, he feels my love within his heart...and the best feeling in the world is to feel his love within as well...

Tee aka The Diva's Thoughts said...

Very beautiful girl!!

JStar said...

Thankie Tee...I am on cloud 9 right now...

Unbreakable said...

This is just awesome! I wish you guys all the best.

JStar said...

Thanks a lot Unbreakable! I am hoping this works out for us as well....I guess only time can tell...

Lady Dee said...

I'm so happy for you. :)

JStar said...

Thanks Dee :) I will be even happier when he FINALLY takes me back lol...But we talk everyday about everything, so its not like things have changed; except the titling of "Girl Friend"

Gregorio Martino said...

That was beautiful. What a lucky man you have.

JStar said...

Thanks Gregorio, you know I love my Navy man :)

Elizabeth said...

wow J. this is mad tight. words can't explain how i feel. i like this poem a lot. you have talent woman!

p.s. your baby girls are adorable!

Liam said...

He is a very lucky man. I wish you the best.

JStar said...

Thanks Elizabeth, I am glad you liked it :) They are my pride and joy!

Thanks Liam :) I hope the he realizes it, but I know he does...

Secretia said...

You are a talented and inspirational poet.
I'll be reading all of your work.

Secretia

JStar said...

Awww thanks sooo muc Secretia...I am honored :)

Organic Meatbag said...

I am very glad that you are finding your happiness!

JStar said...

Thanks Organic...Me too...Its about time lol