Monday, December 14, 2009

My Sunrise

Your love is like the sunrise
Being there indefinite is not a compromise
Like the water fall
So elegant and pouring you it’s all
Like an ocean
Not always smooth but deep with emotion
Like a rose
With time matures and grows
Like a mountain
Strong and never doubting
Like a river
Continuously flowing, making me quiver
Like a flower
Beautiful and ready to empower
Like a beach
Relaxing with destination out of reach
Like the clouds
It’s presence is endowed
Like a Lion and cub
Secure, safe and always filled with love
Like a home
Stable, domesticated and never alone

© copyright Tue Aug 04 17:55:19 UTC 2009 - All Rights Reserved

16 comments:

Secretia said...

That is so complimentary to your loved one. I really like it!

Secretia

JStar said...

:) Thanks...I actualy wrote this for my EX husband tho lol

G-Man said...

JStar...
Thank You for visiting my blog .I think you should try a Friday Flash 55.
I think you would do well at it.

JStar said...

Thanks for gracing my page the infamous G Man! Yea, I was reading about that...I think I will have to try it out :)

Dulce said...

You woman feel love to the deepest.. as it must!
Beautiful!

JStar said...

:) Thanks Dulce...

Elizabeth said...

i like this one. it shows your in love and secure with him. have you though of publishing these?

JStar said...

Yea Elizabeth, I am actually compling them into story format and going to publish...Just trying to write a few more poems before publishing.

Liam said...

Would I be right in saying that it seems like lately all your words are more upbeat and inspiring?

JStar said...

:) Yes, you've noticed Liam....I am in a better place now :) I went through some depression and eventho things arent any better, I made the choice to be happy and go after what I want!

Don said...

from the beginning to the every last word this poem is a winner jstar. i too was about to state how your guy is doing a great great job until i saw where you stated the poem was actually written for your ex.

in the end, i guess it's just a shining testament to love, period.

good stuff, and congrats on your blog award.

JStar said...

LOL...Yea, Don....It was written for the ex husband...but the poems I wrote him I had yet to experience these feelings...So now I do have that in my life :) I just cant wait until my baby gets here!!! I miss him soo...

Thanks :) I am honored I keep getting all these awards...I got two I need to give out msyelf...

25champ said...

It's good that someone still loves to the full extent. Great post. Check Season's of love and U changed me u are currently following http://25champ-lovestoned.blogspot.com/

JStar said...

I am following all of your blogs 25 Champ...

Regina said...

I felt it flowed rather nicely..and you wrote this about your X..oh boy. Anyway, I thought the emotions played nice with the elements- Great re-post-

JStar said...

Thanks Regina, I am glad that you graced my blog :) Yea, I wrote this for my ex while things were still good...