I am not fakin this time around
My feelings for you are deep and profound
I know I hurt you not just once but more than twice
When your love will always suffice
I am ready to give you all of me
Not half or a fraction, ALL of me
You are someone I could commit the rest of my life to
For you there is nothing I wouldnt do
When I am around you my heart skips a beat
My body goes numb from my head to my feet
Nothing else matters, as if time is standing still
Wanting this feeling to last from now until
Forever and a day
Words cant possibly relay all that my heart wants to say
My actions will show my hearts true emotions
To you I pledge my undying devotion
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY STEVE (My step father)
21 comments:
Wow Girl... That IS love!
:) Yes, yes, yes and I can no longer deny it...Now I just cant wait until he gets here...I never thought it was possible to feel this way about someone that I havent seen in months...Any other time I would have gotten bored and moved on...But its just something about him that I cant get over...No other man could ever compare :)
I know so well what you feel...Good luck and enjoy him!!!
Thanks, I sure will do that :)
I hope he hears you because I'm convinced. God Bless and Good Luck!
Thanks soo much 25Champ! Thanks for reading, I see this is the first time I have seen ya...Will have to check ya out...I Pray he hears me loud and clear as well...But he knows, he feels my love within his heart...and the best feeling in the world is to feel his love within as well...
Very beautiful girl!!
Thankie Tee...I am on cloud 9 right now...
This is just awesome! I wish you guys all the best.
Thanks a lot Unbreakable! I am hoping this works out for us as well....I guess only time can tell...
I'm so happy for you. :)
Thanks Dee :) I will be even happier when he FINALLY takes me back lol...But we talk everyday about everything, so its not like things have changed; except the titling of "Girl Friend"
That was beautiful. What a lucky man you have.
Thanks Gregorio, you know I love my Navy man :)
wow J. this is mad tight. words can't explain how i feel. i like this poem a lot. you have talent woman!
p.s. your baby girls are adorable!
He is a very lucky man. I wish you the best.
Thanks Elizabeth, I am glad you liked it :) They are my pride and joy!
Thanks Liam :) I hope the he realizes it, but I know he does...
You are a talented and inspirational poet.
I'll be reading all of your work.
Secretia
Awww thanks sooo muc Secretia...I am honored :)
I am very glad that you are finding your happiness!
Thanks Organic...Me too...Its about time lol
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