Thursday, April 22, 2010

Sugar Coated

Sugar Coated

Thoughts continuously flowing
In my head
Pouring out of my soul
Like sweet sugar coating my words
Sprinkling your heart
With purple rain drops
Comforting your spirit
Calming your doubts
Dismantling your fears
Your mind drifting
Into my world
Heeding my lessons
Feeling my passion
The heat rising from my veins
The steadiness of my heart beat
Compassion for my pains
My journey to inner happiness
Presenting my life through my words
Sugar coated

17 comments:

RoByn LaTice said...

"Like sweet sugar coating my words
Sprinkling your heart
With purple rain drops
Comforting your spirit
Calming your doubts
Dismantling your fears"

Beautiful as always!

JStar said...

Thanks Robyn :)

Jingle said...

another winner,
you are in poetic mood, I am happy for you.

25champ said...

Ur version of sugar coated doesn't feel so decieving...instead it warms the heart with gentle words. Love it!

Brian Miller said...

purple rain drops...love it...keep that muse flowing...this one was really comforting...

JStar said...

Yes Jingle, that I am...Thanks for enjoying!

Yea Champ, I coulda taken that to another level erotically but I wanted to show yall my take on that, and plus it went with my quote :)

Thanks Brian! Purple Rain actually has a whole other meaning to me...I will write that one at another time! I am glad that you found comfort in my words!

Dulce said...

This is so smart and also magic! Girl, you have a unique way with words!
I just love it!
;)

Divyanshu said...

uniqueness yeah,,
and that line...
compassion for my pains ,,
what a great one there :D
http://blog.divyanshu.net/2010/04/thursday-poets-rally/

Don said...

I feel you @ Feeling my passion
The heat rising from my veins
The steadiness of my heart beat
Compassion for my pains
My journey to inner happiness
Presenting my life through my words
Sugar coated


You pen lyrics just as quickly as Prince does, I tell you the truth.

Lyn said...

Sometimes we think we can't write..but once started we are blessed not to stop..thank you!!

william said...

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM DEAR XXX
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Tee aka The Diva's Thoughts said...

You are very talented.

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/23/the-perfect-poet-award-week-15-announcement/

special award
read the details and have fun!

Senorita said...

I hope you write a book someday, you are very talented.

järnebrand said...

Wow... This one felt really special. I love it. Beautiful flow and very comforting. Have a wonderful weekend! Hugs/ Jo.

ray said...

Your mind drifting
Into my world
Heeding my lessons

So wonderful...

Realliveman said...

This is a wonderful piece!