Friday, April 30, 2010

His Voice-Friday's 55

Good Morning All!  TGIF!!!!!!!!  I just wrote this one for G-Man's Friday 55!  FYI- I added an awards page and picture page, the links are displayed at the top :)  I am sorry to inform you that I removed my "Sexual Healing" section of my poetry.  I have chosen to keep my erotic poetry private.  I have to keep some things personal :)  Have a blessed and wonderful weekend!

His voice makes my heart skip a beat
Sending chills from my head to my feet
My stomach fills with butterflies
Vibrations felt through my thighs
Senses alert
He is the whip cream to my dessert
Tasting his essence
Feeling his presence
His voice comforts my heart
His voice is assurance when we are apart

37 comments:

Brian Miller said...

i dunno this one has some steam to it...smiles. or maybe my imagination is taking over..lol. hope you have a wonderful weekend!

JStar said...

Brian, youre on point...It has a lot of steam....I havent seen him in a year and a few days...So, his voice is the only thing that keeps me going! He will be here very very soon (From Cali), he is just awaiting his medical release so his orders can be fulfilled(military men, I tell you lol). I am getting excited, hince this poem :)

Hootin' Anni said...

Oh my gosh....even after my own 40+ years of having just the one man...I can feel your words!! Excellent.

Mine this week is DOUBLE STANDARD As always, scroll down a bit, below my Friday's Show n Tell.

Have a super weekend fellow 55'r!!

sheri... said...

whew, this leaves me blushing...and envious!! spicy 55 :)

JStar said...

*smiles*@Hootin' Anni...Yea, that one def came from the heart :) Thanks for stopping by, on my way to your 55!

JStar said...

Thats exactly how I am feeling Sheri :)

Yvonne Osborne said...

Spicy hot! Just the way I like my weekends! Nicely done, J. I think the 55 is meant for poetry, my first love, writerly speaking, that is.

This I especially like..."He is the whip cream to my dessert."

First time on your blog....followed you here from Jo's.

Thanks!!

JStar said...

Thanks Yvonne for stopping by! Isnt Jo just GREAT! Actually books were my first love but havent completed one since I was a teen :) Poetry just came natural...I am on my way to your blog to return the favor!

John's comments said...

Phew, pass me the fan. if this is cold writing, I can see why the hot stuff is back under the counter. Gone for a poem this week based on the Etheree form created about twenty years ago by an Arkansas poet named Etheree Taylor Armstrong It normally consists of ten lines of unmetered and unrhymed verse, the first line having one syllable, each succeeding line adding a syllable. I added an extra row for the word count and the punch line. See what I mean here.

25champ said...

Good old sexual tension right there.

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Very nice.. my hubby is in Korea now..I can totally relate...

You are so right in keeping some things PRIVATE.

Have you a great weekend.
hugs
shakira

JStar said...

*smiles*@John...Yea, my "hot" stuff is very detailed...too detailed I would say lol...I will check out your edits :) Your 55 was brilliantly written!

JStar said...

You could feel it huh Champ? lol...I have to agree...A year is a mighty long time, I tell ya...I just sent him my poem, when he wakes up(Its way too early in Cali now) I hope he enjoys it...

YES Shakira, it takes a strong relationship for a sacrifice like this. At times I thought we wouldnt make it, but all of that just made "us" stronger!

Jingle said...

touching!

JStar said...

:)@Jingle

Don said...

I believe you forgot to add this to your erotic poetry section. LOL! Good stuff.

JStar said...

LOL...Don, its actually not erotic...Thats just how deep his voice affects me...I mean down to my soul...I wasnt even talking about sex at all...Those were just emotions being felt explained...Just from the sound of his voice...

luna12780 said...

How sweet :) I really like how you made it rhyme and the phrases you chose. Nice

JStar said...

:) Thanks Luna...

Alice Audrey said...

Nice one! Not actually erotic, but certainly sensual.

JStar said...

Thank you Alice! Thats what I was going for...All that I described were the emotions inside that I feel just by merely hearing the sound of his voice...Even just saying "Hello" I guess the sensual part was a natural reaction to have for a man that I am in love with...But this to me, was like missing him, eagerly awaiting him and how just his voice comforts me in his absense...But yea, a lil flirty...I think it was the line "Vibrations felt through my thighs" but that was just the electric feeling all over that I get from his voice and thighs rhymed with butterflies lol...

steveroni said...

LOVED IT! All I had to do was change the "he" to "she" and the "his" to "hers"...and it made a LOT more sense.....to me.

BEAUTIFUL words. Thank you!

JStar said...

:) Thanks Steve!

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

Me got awards, tribute and nominations for you? Happy Weekend! hugs shakira

Miss.Fortune said...

i miss this feeling!
=(
but i loved this poem
=)

Dulce said...

You say you put away your sensual sexual work? Where is it...?

some you've left behind here!
I love it
And I love your new template and changes in tha blog: beautiful!

hugs dear
And have a sweet weekend!
;)

Miss.Stefanie said...

Oh la la!

G-Man said...

Jennifer...
Your writing is SMOKIN HOT!
Excellently Erotic 55 My Friend.
Great new Avatar pic as well..
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...!

Eternally Distracted said...

Seems like a lucky guy!!

Cynthia said...

Your poem is hearbreaking and
heart-inspiring. I have been
guilty of taking the day for
granted, as well as one or two
people. Thank you.

Cynthia said...

Oopsie - sorry J. I have two
comment boxes, popping up and I
wrote the wrong comment in yours.

Your poem as usual is sweet and
loving. Hope you get a chance to
stop by poemflesh2. and comment
on my latest dialogue. Thanks!

Katherine said...

Hmmm that some saucy stuff right there!!! A very sensual TT indeed!

The Write Girl said...

This is a beautiful Flash 55 filled with passion. I enjoyed the read. Have an amazing weekend :)

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/02/poetry-awards-for-week-16-thursday-poets-rally/

2 poetry awards,
2 friendship award...
Happy Sunday!
Happy May!

Jingle said...

http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/jingles-may-followers-award.html

Happy Monday!

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/03/jingles-may-awards-week-1-awards-4-u-all/

I posted the awards for May.
please feel free to take what you want from there.
Happy Monday!

JStar said...

:) Ya'll are the best!